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I See Myself
Contributed by
DannyGirl
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Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:45:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I see myself standing there
I see myself not through a mirror
I see myself from a ravens view
In black and white and ruff and skewed
My face is blurred my back is turned
In a mystical world confused
Disconnected but not alone
I see myself we’re two though one
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DannyGirl
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2006-09-26 18:45:38]
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Re: I See Myself
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by CaptainSpaldo05 on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 08:30:58 PM AEST
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I see myself wanting you to expand on this..
Good write, indeed. |
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Re: I See Myself
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by DannyGirl on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 12:40:20 AM AEST
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| Ok-Do you ever feel like your dead inside, like your living your life watching from the outskirts? Like things aren't real? I guess when I say "we're two though one", I'm talking about the person I am on the outside and the person inside my head, my thoughts and fears and dreams. Did I confuse you more! |
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Re: I See Myself
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by catz77 on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 06:32:44 PM AEST
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i get this write
i like your poetry
catz |
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