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Heart
Contributed by
Uncertain_Oblivion
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Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 12:36:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Slithering lies seeps between your bitter lips,
looking for an accepting heart to burrow in.
Well, I've got nothing to lose...
here's mine.
~Rhiannon
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2006-09-26 12:36:48]
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Re: Heart
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 02:12:50 PM AEST
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Interesting format. I liked it. It was fresh, short, and true.
Naomi |
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Re: Heart
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 03:24:38 PM AEST
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Sister, I love how you can sting with such few words. You're on fire here.
Peace, Laura (who finds the little pieces of you....written here....quite intriguing) |
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Re: Heart
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:32:51 PM AEST
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I agree with Laura. I love how your writes imact so much in so few words. It's actually pretty hard to do, but you do it well.
I think it would be interesting to see this continued with, however, I do like it as it is.
Good write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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