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A Fallen Tear
Contributed by
Hynth
on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:52:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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My eye's met yours, two signals but one purpose,
Everything changed, my life was yours.
The dance we created carved strong, my heart,
The drink we drank cleansed my soul, so much untold.
I remeber your smell, so sweet and clean,
Your touch so soft, your hair like silk.
My expression so FULL of love and my world was complete,
I sang so much, my feeling's compared to that of clouds.
My Dear I called you, my perfection, my life,
You were my number one but now I have none.
I look down right now, I see a broken soul,
The feeling of flying has gone once more.
I want your touch, your hair like silk.
I want my world back, I love you SO MUCH!
But you have gone now, just a memory in my heart,
Which injects poison so much, the pain is so great.
My soul has been shattered, the pieces so pathetic,
I MISS you so much.
And now I look in the mirror, my face so different.
No smile there no more, so empty without direction.
My eyes so dark, weary and lost.
A fallen tear alone, in the turmoil of a devestating loss.
Copyright ©
Hynth
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2006-09-26 06:52:17]
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Re: A Fallen Tear
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by GurLG0nEWr0ng on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 07:03:06 AM AEST
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Really beautiful. Man love sucks.
Well keep your head up. What more can u do
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Re: A Fallen Tear
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 07:27:18 AM AEST
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Very sad, yet beautifull in it's own right.
Awesome, moving write.
I'm so happy we can express our inner pain as there's healing even with the pain.
Maybe, you just think it's one sided.
Or maybe she don't know how to recognize true luv.
Hang tuff.
luv, big huggs,
emy |
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Re: A Fallen Tear
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by Winterland on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 10:01:57 AM AEST
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Your joy and then your pain come through very strong and clear. You did a fabulous job of sharing your feelings through these mere words.
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Re: A Fallen Tear
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 02:28:30 PM AEST
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You've expressed so much pain here. I hope it helps you to heal. I find poetry very theraputic. Time heals all wounds, or so they say. May you find peace soon. :o) Good write.
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