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darlin it aint me
Contributed by
brave_celt
on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:24:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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leave now from my front door
go at any chosen pace
I'm not what your looking for
you're not in the right place
you're looking for someone
who is always strong
to honor and defend you
even when your wrong
love has made you blind so you nolonger see
your looking for someone but darlin it aint me
you're lookin for a stable man
with a promise to never part
you can't count on on me babe
for i'll only break your heart
walk away from the edge dear
it's safer on the ground
im not what you're looking for
im only what you've found
love has made you blind so you nolonger see
your looking for someone but darlin it ain't me
so leave now from my front door
go at any chosen speed
im not what your lookin for
im just now what you need
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Re: darlin it aint me
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by Oneir8dude on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:50:49 AM AEST
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Honesty is the best policy...
Thank You for sharing
Bill |
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Re: darlin it aint me
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 07:13:04 AM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: darlin it aint me
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by poewhit on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 08:51:25 AM AEST
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| Alot of BOB DYLAN words in that poem.Yet, we are like ships passing in the night. If we set the same tack that is love. Yet we are seperate ships in life. |
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Re: darlin it aint me
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 09:02:23 AM AEST
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Well, now...you are quickly catching my eye with your poetry. This piece so honest, brutally honest. Enjoyed the read...I am a sucker for capitalization though, with the i's. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: darlin it aint me
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by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 02:09:00 PM AEST
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This is straight forward honesty. Someone once said that to me. You know we are the best of friends now. So all was not lost. My words to him helped.
Don't stay because you promised me,
If its not what you want please say.
You broached a subject a lot of us can identify with, and really made it a work of art. It was a painful and thought provoking to read, A thoughtful but sad poem. Sue x |
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Re: darlin it aint me
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 02:11:57 PM AEST
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Made me smile. I appreciate honesty, and you're definately honest here. :o) Actually, this comes out more like song lyrics. Good R&R. Will be reading more of your stuff fer sure! Peace to ya!
Thumper ;o) |
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Re: darlin it aint me
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by AnastasiaN on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 03:20:46 PM AEST
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| i've never looked at it in this way...this is very sad and unnerving as well. it's crazy how someone can fall for another so hard and love them so much....but be blind to how the other feels. why do you suppose that happens? |
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