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Victim
Contributed by
AnastasiaN
on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:20:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm no one
I'm nothing
Come punch me in the face
I'm empty
I've nothing
Come put me in my place
You hate me
Reject me
You've won yet again
I'm worn out
I'm beaten
You can't take anymore
I give up
I surrender
My lifeless body is yours
Copyright ©
AnastasiaN
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2006-09-26 06:20:09]
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Re: Victim
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by brave_celt on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:26:47 AM AEST
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awsome write i love it
you should help me with my group of outlaw poets. its a group of poets who feel they are less wanted or tolerated in poetry because of their style or the views they express.
contact me at bigred138213@yahoo.com
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Re: Victim
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by Oneir8dude on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:53:06 AM AEST
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Very nice write...
I enjoyed this... although it left me saddenedfor you...
Thank You
Bill |
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Re: Victim
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 07:09:06 AM AEST
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Very sad but never give up!
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Victim
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 10:47:10 PM AEST
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| excellent flow |
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Re: Victim
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 08:51:48 AM AEST
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This was amazing... The way that it was written was brillant.. I liked this alot.. I can relate to how you are feeling or felt in this poem.. This was well expressed.. Amazing..
Take care
christina |
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