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night
Contributed by
riverofwords
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Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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the night is a good friend at times
we can hide in the shadows and not show ourselves
for fear of that the mask hiding what we feel may shatter
here in the night there is safety
alone with your thoughts
just the gloom deepening ..getting darker
the night is a shelter a refuge from the world
the dark has no hurtful words to yell at you
no accusations to make
the darkness caresses you with its shadowy tentacles
and eventually you may fall asleep in its
empty embrace
night gone morning light dawns
mask reappears ,you hide from yourself again,waiting for the anonomity of thenight to embrace you once again in its lonely emptiness
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Re: night
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 08:36:38 PM AEST
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I completely agree. I love the night. Awesome write.
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: night
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by riverofwords on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 07:31:05 AM AEST
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thank you for your comment ..much appreciated
peace be your journey
terry |
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Re: night
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 08:48:03 AM AEST
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| "Oh, but the night brings dreams", thanks so much for sharing this, |
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Re: night
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by LadyDama on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 05:05:42 AM AEST
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| i love this poem... i love the night and ofter seek it as refuge... beautiful... |
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Re: night
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by venkat on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 05:54:01 AM AEST
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| Nicely written.. I would like to ask you to read my poem 'a garland of lillies'.. ofcourse if you are not bothered.. venkat |
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Re: night
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by Tanna on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 10:13:10 AM AEST
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| I can completely relate to this one. Sometimes it's so much easier to stay behind the mask. |
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Re: night
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 02:23:37 AM AEST
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| i love this poem:) hugs nessa |
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