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End of Mine
Contributed by
thumper
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Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 01:13:13 AM in AEST
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The darkness that constant smothers me
Greys up, way too occasionally
Rarely, yea, rarely to paler shades of hope.
The granite sealed mood set stonily in my soul
Sends tendrils up through the ebon reality
Searching for the elusive haze of almost happiness.
The numbness that cradles me like a babe
Halts suffering to keep me from crumbling away
Into obscure nothingness, anonymity.
The light winked out eons ago. Gone. Disappeared.
Not with the sharp POP of a bulb protesting existence
But quietly, without dignity. Expiring with a whimpered sigh.
Thumps
Copyright ©
thumper
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2006-09-26 01:13:13]
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Re: End of Mine
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 01:46:55 AM AEST
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It flowed very well, so I give you five thumps, Thumper. “Smile” things can change in an instinct. May peace be with you.
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Re: End of Mine
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 03:08:28 AM AEST
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Keep the faith as life turns.
It gets very hard at times but u r tuff, you can get thru.
Great writing, by the way.
huggs, faith, smiles,
emy |
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Re: End of Mine
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 09:14:49 AM AEST
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Yes like Emy saids keep the faith
I go through often too and its not a good feeling at all to be depress.
take care |
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Re: End of Mine
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by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 02:21:45 PM AEST
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| This is sad and emotional. Depression, at its worst. But what brings us down, can also make us fight harder, to prove we can beat it. Not sure if that makes sense written down. Well I know it works. Take care, your words spoke a lot of truth. Sue x |
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Re: End of Mine
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by Sparkz16 on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 06:37:50 PM AEST
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| depression sucks..i kno that you know that i know...confusing lol i love it grandma nice to see your still writing ;) |
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Re: End of Mine
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 03:55:46 AM AEST
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Dark the content but bright the quality of the writing.You have captured the darkness of depression,so well,here.
Den |
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Re: End of Mine
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 09:37:45 PM AEST
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Glad to be graced with your comment and upon this read I pray for more of your poems. Please keep writing and posting. I hope the light of love and true warmth and passion has lifted you from such depths.
Blessings
Yangdantien |
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Re: End of Mine
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by linagalMBfan01 on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 10:09:34 AM AEST
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gramma i really wish i could do something to help you shake this. i love you so much and i hate to see you hurting.
love you,
your sunshine but not your only |
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Re: End of Mine
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 08:13:29 AM AEST
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beautifully written with tangible images....
love n' hugs nessa |
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