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Gone
Contributed by
The_Young_Poet
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Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 04:58:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I screamed out your name
Over and over, I cried desperately
The volume of my voice seemed to drop
The image of you has faded
As you seemed to walk away
I don't want to say another cliche
For love, as now you are gone.
For which, I cannot control
It hurts too much to try and try
For something everyone knew wouldn't work
I was in such denial then
I've finally learned my lesson
And let you be, allowing to let go
To let go of the pain I tried to hold onto
You were my pain
Copyright ©
The_Young_Poet
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2006-09-25 16:58:32]
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Re: Gone
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 05:28:33 PM AEST
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| the emotion in this poem is amazing. |
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Re: Gone
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by Oneir8dude on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 11:54:11 PM AEST
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Thank You very meaningful and heartfelt...
I hope you are okay...
Bill |
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Re: Gone
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 12:22:38 AM AEST
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U might be a young poet but ur a great writer.
huggs,
emy
also very wise. |
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Re: Gone
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 12:50:18 AM AEST
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Deep heartfelt emotions poured out from your write. One can feel the pain and sadness through your words. You have done a great job penning down your emotions. By doing that it helps your broken heart to heal. Wishing you much brighter days ahead.
take care.
hugs n prayers,
Sue M |
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Re: Gone
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by Mangos on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 04:18:54 PM AEST
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Very powerful-
Something everyone’s probably felt
Awesome job
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