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Unfixable
Contributed by
Beckett0306
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Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 10:49:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In the begining it was alive
I felt it was truley a part of my life
Not controlling how it always felt
Reacting differently in situations it was dealt
Some days warm and cozy
Other days torn and holey
The ride it took me on was crazy
Ups and downs enough to make superman dazy
But all of a sudden it came back to form
My life was calm, like the eye of the storm
Then as soon as she came she left
leaving me standing in a cold sweat
A body with no heart
My life torn apart
I want it back together
Ive tried so hard to make it better
But its tough to do alone
Mending pieces of this broken stone...
...they call my heart.
Copyright ©
Beckett0306
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2006-09-24 22:49:59]
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Re: Unfixable
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by ToriVeigh on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 10:57:31 PM AEST
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| I felt every word. Good write! |
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Re: Unfixable
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 01:08:41 PM AEST
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| i felt this very deeply but time will fix what was broken...good poem... |
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Re: Unfixable
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 08:19:36 PM AEST
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Time heals all wounds my friend. I hope that you find that someone special real soon so that you can put all the hurt and pain behind you. A touching, deep and heartfelt write. Keep writing friend for it helps to ease the pain. May things brighten up for you real soon. Take care.
hugs n prayers,
Sue M |
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