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Delicius Autumn
Contributed by
twbanter
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Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 10:34:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Delicious autumn
Autumn winds are blowing
And the rain is gently falling
The trees are deep in foliage
The geese fly by
Is this not the perfect picture
Of why life is?
While it doesn’t explain how it began
It screams out why it is
And then some
Delicious autumn
You awe me
There’s no match for you
All your colors
And crisp breezes
Aglow in your sunsets
Who can touch this?
Certainly not me
I watch you happen
So gratefully
There’s not a string of my body
That doesn’t react to this
While all the seasons count
You’re the best
Copyright ©
twbanter
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2006-09-24 22:34:28]
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Re: Delicius Autumn
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by ToriVeigh on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 10:59:42 PM AEST
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| Great write! Autumn is my favorite too and you described its essence beautifully. |
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Re: Delicius Autumn
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 02:32:53 AM AEST
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| Very good poem, and yes I love Autumn too. It is such a deeply colourful time of year. Sue xx |
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Re: Delicius Autumn
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by Skillz on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 02:59:04 AM AEST
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My favourite time of year..this line was awesome..the whole poem was
"While it doesn’t explain how it began
It screams out why it is"
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Re: Delicius Autumn
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by CaddishCut on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 04:16:43 AM AEST
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| Autumn is beautiful and you wrote a great feel of the season. |
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