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Regarding Intimacy

Contributed by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 08:47:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry






With his hands upon the skin of her soul,
His fingertips tracing her essence,
He trembled his way into her
And stole, from the world, her presence.

With her breath beating inside his heart,
Her sighs pulsing through his aura,
She tumbled her way into him
And found, there within, his glory.

They spoke in words not yet defined
And touched with nary a movement
They danced to a song all their own
And discovered true fulfillment.

Time would move on, as it does
But this endless moment held them
He had fallen so entirely to her
And she'd fallen, too, to meet him.

Everything then aspired to more
Though, none of it seemed to matter
Except her love echoed in his heart
And his passion deep inside her.




Copyright © Silent-No-More ... [ 2006-09-24 20:47:00]
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Re: Regarding Intimacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 09:47:23 PM AEST
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I love how ya walked the fine line of soul intimacy with metaphoric passion, Snemmy. Wonderful work 'n' I'm gonna take yer word 'n' assurances t' heart which increase the vastness of its meaning. Enjoyed this write immensely.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy


Re: Regarding Intimacy (User Rating: 1 )
by ToriVeigh on Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 11:02:32 PM AEST
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I loved this! It teased me and drew me in. I hope to read more from you.


Re: Regarding Intimacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 08:25:11 AM AEST
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To find the perfect words that can describe the meeting of two souls is,perhaps,the literary Grail.With this deeply-passionate and beautiful piece,you have,certainly, hit the button for me; though I understand,fully,the author's comment.You have something wonderful here and I'm warmed for you,

Den


Re: Regarding Intimacy (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 11:16:57 AM AEST
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Beautifully romantic, and sexy. It was such a dreamy read. I was riding on each word. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura


Re: Regarding Intimacy (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 12:30:17 AM AEST
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This was just beautiful! You truly draw the reader in and take their breath away. Excellent imagery! BRAVO! 5/5
Thumpers ;o)


Re: Regarding Intimacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 07:56:34 PM AEST
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It sorta reminds me of an angel taking someone to heaven. I don't know why, but that seem to hit me as I read the line And stole, from the world, her presence and continued....heaven. Forever, in true love, in heaven, where time has no meaning. I generally like to leave my interpretations to myself and just revel in the moment of your extraordinary writing, which, yeah, I did as I've read this a few times, now, wow, yeah!!!!! Yowza!!!! but just kinda had ta throw that out there. Indeed amazing and heavenly. Always taken back a bit when I read your genius.

Sincerely,

Timbo


Re: Regarding Intimacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 02:57:28 PM AEST
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At first glance this poem appears sensuous, filled with desire and passion, and sexual connotations. But intuitively it strikes at a more intense essence, to t he depeth of the soul... involving a spiritual element. This is a wonderful and expertly crafted poem.

Well done, Snemmy

Will


Re: Regarding Intimacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Uncertain_Oblivion on Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 02:24:58 PM AEST
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Now, this...is love.


Re: Regarding Intimacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Leoricx on Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 01:12:59 PM AEST
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Nicely done. I think you've really managed to fuse the sensual and physical with the emotional and spiritual here.

The whole thing speaks of a love so deep and heartfelt it can be nothing but beautiful.

A job very well done!
:D


Re: Regarding Intimacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 10:37:22 AM AEST
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Nice work


Re: Regarding Intimacy (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 11:51:53 AM AEST
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This was amazing... I thought that this poem was very beautiful, well written and it was just amazing.. I enjoyed reading it...

Take care
Christina


Re: Regarding Intimacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 05:35:38 PM AEST
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this was very sweet. it made me smile, which is good cause too many poems these days make me cry.

xXx
kei


Re: Regarding Intimacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Friday, 17th August 2007 @ 09:58:15 PM AEST
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This is excellent poet! I am thrilled at the depth of feeling, the intensity and the passion captured in your words. This does not just scrape at the edges of such ideas, but plunges deep inside them and revels in it.
I read these words as containing quiet intimacy, but simultaneously I found them to be inherently joyous and celebratory. A beautiful combination!

Truly,
Dom




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