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Remind me of my Death
Contributed by
Jambox
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Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 02:17:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Face the darkness without fear
Without a powerful brown loathing for the damaged nights hard black cold air
If theres a point to all of this we should all just die now
I dont want to die in my sleep
I dont want to miss it, but that's just me
Let me tell you about life death and all of the blue shaded spaces in between
The great golden godesses of the ages before us have disappeared
Where are they?
The strange liquid night sky smiles down at you with nothing but its cold whorish eyes
The stars are the fibbers and sluts of the night
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Re: Remind me of my Death
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by MG_Akela22090 on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 02:55:02 PM AEST
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| Beautiful...i really loved this poem....it's exactly how I feel right now....kepp it up! |
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Re: Remind me of my Death
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by RLWildPassions on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 03:15:37 PM AEST
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welcome to ypdc.
lets just pray, for like you or I, who knows, a prayer, where...
life if strife
giving is reliving
death is leth you worry about it, and let it be,
for you see, its ...
same, game...
see you in heaven brethren...
you coming? rl |
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Re: Remind me of my Death
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by InfamousKilljoy on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 03:51:22 PM AEST
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| Very descriptive, and dark. I loved you rhyme scheme it's very unique. Check out mine. |
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Re: Remind me of my Death
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by InfamousKilljoy on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 03:52:13 PM AEST
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| I meant unique rhythem |
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Re: Remind me of my Death
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by Lionel on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 06:08:44 PM AEST
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| God, what a strange opinion; but, you got it said. The news of your death is greatly exagerated - dead people can't write poetry. |
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