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Simple
Contributed by
lil_pup91
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Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 11:13:43 AM in AEST
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oops
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Running
spinning
wind in my face
sun warming my very soul
simple things
that give happiness
simple things
that make eeryone smile in pure joy
never can that be taken away
so dont even try
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2006-09-24 11:13:43]
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Re: Simple
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by New_York_Chick on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 01:30:56 PM AEST
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i like the way your title reflects not only what th epoem is about but the way it's written
great job! |
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Re: Simple
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by CaddishCut on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 04:12:13 AM AEST
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| yay! this put a big smile on my face, and uplifted me from my previous mood |
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