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I'd Like a Chair in my Closet
Contributed by
sally-heart-jack
on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 02:52:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Afraid in my closet
I close the door
I don't want to be scared
this much anymore.
I changed my mind
I don't wish to be thrilled
Rewind the scary movie
My back is too chilled.
I did it, but
They dismissed my warning
I need to relive it
I think back to the morning
when they found me behind
that rundown motel
I head down the block
and think to myself
As I walk and see the
windsheild covered with frost
those who are wandering
are not always lost
Copyright ©
sally-heart-jack
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2006-09-24 02:52:40]
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Re: I'd Like a Chair in my Closet
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by brave_celt on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 06:45:06 AM AEST
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| nice write i enjoyed it |
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Re: I'd Like a Chair in my Closet
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by MG_Akela22090 on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 03:03:40 PM AEST
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| Well, my opinion is that you are trying to convey that you know what you're doing with your life even if everyone else doesn't. I really loved this....it brought a lot to mind....kudos for you! |
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Re: I'd Like a Chair in my Closet
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by AnastasiaN on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:27:35 AM AEST
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| interesting....made me read it over a couple times yet i'm more interested in what your intention was...or maybe it's just cuz it's 4:30 in the morning and my brain is functioning half in sleep mode. |
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