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Nonscientific
Contributed by
Elisabeth
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Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 12:39:08 AM in AEST
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Behind the mind
Absorbing time
As a righteous slut
In this void
Right shall be wrong
The truth inside
Lives dead outside
To prove eternity
Before the kingdom came
Too late, too long
Trailing behind
As the wise fool has said,
"It lies in the hands of simplicity."
And so the right sin's deed
Became complex
Leading the right
Into the lake of fire
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Elisabeth
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2006-09-24 00:39:08]
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Re: Nonscientific
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 12:42:18 AM AEST
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interesting way of saying that
well done |
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Re: Nonscientific
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by Skillz on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 12:54:01 AM AEST
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Oh i really liked that...esp this part
"As the wise fool has said,
"It lies in the hands of simplicity" |
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Re: Nonscientific
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by twbanter on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 10:57:40 AM AEST
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Absorbing time.... Don't we all? Great write!
Great words there, nice mix.
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Re: Nonscientific
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 10:16:52 PM AEST
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Enjoying every moment, each line led me to the metaphoric realization of temptation and the rationalization for just jumpin' "into the lake of fire." Quite a write, Elisabeth!
wabl
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