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love me like a son
Contributed by
brave_celt
on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 08:25:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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love me like a child
a child in need of a tender touch
treat me not with malice
molesting my very soul
love me like a son
a son in need of intimate friendship
retard your quandry for a twinkling
give me clemency and show mercy
i am revolutionising my ways
now is not the time to chasten
but the the time to encourage me
the time to inspire and believe in me
love me like a son
why
I AM YOUR SON
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2006-09-22 08:25:33]
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Re: love me like a son
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by LonelyPoet on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 12:52:03 PM AEST
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| your poem was excellent.. very emotional..i was very touched by this..You are off to a great start!!! |
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Re: love me like a son
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by Kimberlynn on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 07:04:03 PM AEST
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| You are a great writer, hands down. That really gives off the emotional message, it was really good. |
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Re: love me like a son
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by CassandraCain on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 04:24:31 PM AEST
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| I'm very impressed with this piece. A lot of intelligent wording and emotion seemed to be put into this. I'd suggest using commas and periods. If this is a true story, I'm truly sorry. |
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