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poem
Contributed by
crazy
on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 07:30:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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drowning in emptyness and failure
i pass by
walking only by demand
aimlessly i go about my day
being as a zombie
nothingness,missing something
feeling hopeless
days go by i look happy
inside i am no one
not structured or well balanced
anger filling the space
a bomb waiting to explode
looking for help
trying to fix myself
my problems ,my pain ,my fault
not wanting to be here
just putting up with it, for them
only suffering for them
my choice not to deal with it no more
trying not to think of it
it lingers there, bickering constently
not giving up
feeling there i wish weren't
trying to hide the from their view
i can't no more
i hate life
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2006-09-22 07:30:05]
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Re: poem
(User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 08:04:31 AM AEST
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Never hate life, it doesn't hurt you, its the people in it.
.
Answer Poem
Darkness comes to all of us,
But it has its place,
It shows us whom we trust,
Within this human race,
So when despair and failure,
Are the cross you have to bear,
Just think there are others like you,
So your not lonely, when they are there.
I know that feeling, so very well. Take care Sue x |
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Re: poem
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 08:04:43 AM AEST
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The expressions of your emotions are well expressed in this write. Keep your head up and hang in there.
sadaddy |
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Re: poem
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by brave_celt on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 08:28:25 AM AEST
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| nice work nice use of description you made me feel what you feel |
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Re: poem
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by LonelyPoet on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 12:57:01 PM AEST
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| anyone who writes like this has many facets inside. this was a very good poem. |
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