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Beneath the Cloak
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 03:25:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I hide beneath my cloak so black,
In safety, for confidence I do lack,
No one can hear my muffled cries,
As tears fall from my swollen eyes,
My mind is filled with much regret,
For the real world I cannot face,
Pale and wan I have become,
And of a smile there is no trace,
My body is in turmoil now,
In a feotal position it lies,
No arms to hold me close at night,
All emotion here has died,
Sleep it has no comfort,
For the nightmares come to me,
Is this to be my penance,
Is it it how it has to be,
So beneath the cloak I will remain,
Till my soul is once again free,
Hidden away, is how I will stay,
Its the price I pay for being ME.
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jerseysue
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2006-09-21 15:25:01]
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Re: Beneath the Cloak
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by LonelyPoet on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 05:37:52 PM AEST
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| I can feel your pain, a very well written poem..I'm here if you ever need someone. |
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Re: Beneath the Cloak
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by deadclown on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 07:29:11 PM AEST
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| u always write positive comments to other people on this site givin them great advice. Myself included and I'm sure there's a lot of people here who agree with me when I say we are here for u. I know I can't speak for everyone and I know it's only through written communication but hopefully somehow u won't feel so alone |
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Re: Beneath the Cloak
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 08:01:02 PM AEST
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Sue, You speak in volumes here. I feel your loneliness. Wonderful write.
Peace and hugs to you,
Laura |
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Re: Beneath the Cloak
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by crazy on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 07:42:51 AM AEST
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| im in the same place in my life right now thats amazing you put into words what i could not.i look at it and your poem reflects me sooo much.wonderful emotional write |
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Re: Beneath the Cloak
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by StormyNites on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 01:18:24 PM AEST
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| really good poem..im so sorry for your pain. |
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Re: Beneath the Cloak
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 05:10:08 AM AEST
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wow Sue whats up?
this write is so sad.
Let me know you ever wanna talk.
i am here for you.
hugs |
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