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Still
Contributed by
dollhouse
on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 03:09:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Trapped by one-sided affection
She knows it isn't love
Or right
Or possible
But his charming presence
Is a little light in her day
And she still wants to know
The softness of his lips
The gentleness of his embrace
But all she knows is the honey in his voice
And the sparkle in his brown eyes
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dollhouse
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2006-09-21 15:09:44]
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Re: Still
(User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 06:50:36 PM AEST
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Nice poem! Simple, yet captivating.
Keep writing!
-Butch Corpuz
-Betrayer of Hope |
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Re: Still
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th October 2006 @ 04:57:34 PM AEST
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An emotion captured of love unrequited ..
.. how we all, at one time or another have been in
this place. It takes strength to get through it.
Nice write.
~Breezy
(who ADORES the last two lines ... stunning!) |
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