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Hurt, Pain, and Heartbreak
Contributed by
AnaBanana
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Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 10:12:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The sound of the music as her heart beats;
and her soul flows an ocean called love.
A peaceful melody, rhythmatic and upbeat.
They take away her being;
the ocean becomes a lake,
the lake becomes a river,
and the river a stream.
And then the music stops
and all we hear is the everlasting echo
because the ocean was so big….
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AnaBanana
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2006-09-21 10:12:35]
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Re: Hurt, Pain, and Heartbreak
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 11:41:19 AM AEST
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A breath taking poem.
Michelle |
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Re: Hurt, Pain, and Heartbreak
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by ButchCorpuz on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 06:54:11 PM AEST
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Wow! Enough said...
-Butch Corpuz
-Betrayer of Hope |
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