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Questions

Contributed by Boobee on Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 07:53:22 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

I hear questions
Questions from God in my mind
Can you feel my faith?
It covers you like the warmest blanket
And there is plenty of room for more to believe
Can you see my love?
It is ever present in all the people that you see
Just look past the flesh and into the soul
And look into yourself to see me
Can you hear my spirit?
It calls for you with the gentleness of the voice of a child
Just stop… and listen
Listen to my call
Can you taste the sweetness of my mercy?
It comes from my mouth and my word
And without it, you would taste the bitterness of my wrath
Can you smell my fear?
No, because there is none
I fear nothing, for I created all
All the senses I have given you
Why haven’t you used them?
Why?

Copyright Â© Boobee ... [ 2006-09-21 07:53:22]
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Re: Questions (User Rating: 1 )
by Wilder on Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 07:57:53 AM AEST
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Now I did like this; the message was very clear and the poem was imaginitive. The only thing was you switched from third person; talking ABOUT God, to talking from God's point of view.

I think once you choose who exactly you are writing about and then stick with it (or perhaps alternate the verses one with God's voice one with your own).

7/10 :o)

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