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Piano of Abuse
Contributed by
silent
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Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 06:00:03 AM in AEST
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Like a piano with bloodied keys
Notes wavering and uneven
Melody like one of a child
Never taught to play
But continuing on all the same
Does not matter how much they read
It's distorted all the same
Consumed by anger and fear
Listen inside its all you shall hear
If they could play what's in their mind
So disturbing a melody you would find
Make you cry, weep and sigh
There is nothing to be done
This child here is a lost one
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Re: Piano of Abuse
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by Wilder on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 06:13:48 AM AEST
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I thought this poem was great - I just pictured a young, angry child sitting at a piano, almost forcefully playing it - not through talent, just through sheer frustration.
10/10 :o) |
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Re: Piano of Abuse
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 10:25:56 AM AEST
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very visual and sad. It's very heart wrenching to read
and ocean deep. Keep up the excellent work
If they could play what's in their mind
So disturbing a melody you would find
Make you cry, weep and sigh
Very gripping.. |
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Re: Piano of Abuse
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 02:26:44 PM AEST
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Interesting write
well done |
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Re: Piano of Abuse
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by sally-heart-jack on
Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 11:33:06 PM AEST
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Holy geez wow, this is one of the best I've read on this site, honest.
It's so short but it tells a lot, and like I like how you left a little to the imagination.
I love:
If they could play what's in their mind
So disturbing a melody you would find
and
There is nothing to be done
This child here is a lost one
cool. |
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Re: Piano of Abuse
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by sally-heart-jack on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 06:47:47 PM AEST
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I've got to tell you, this seems like it would fit perfectly with the song A Scale, A Mirror and those Indifferent Clocks by Conor Oberst.
[[ Bright Eyes ]] It's sort of like a distorted, awkward, sad feel, look up the song and see what I mean.
Again, good job in gripping that feel! |
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Re: Piano of Abuse
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 07:45:45 PM AEST
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~:*beautiful*:~
love n' hugs nessa |
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