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Falling
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 02:43:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The dark cloud descends once again,
Upon my mixed up brain,
The pressure in my head so strong,
The demon is back again,
He taunts me in an evil way,
Destroys my sense of pride,
Confronts me with a terror,
From which I cannot hide,
He twists the knife within my side,
The thumb screws he has tightened,
No beauty do I now see in life,
I am scared, dismayed and frightened,
Swallowed by the waves of doubt,
Being slowly taken down,
My life it flashes in front of me,
As in this deluge I do drown,
My arms thrash out in helpless fear,
My legs search for solid ground,
The blood in my veins it rushes fast,
My heart begins to pound,
My nerves they are hanging by a thread,
My eyes show no expression,
I am enclosed within a hollow shell,
By that evil called depression.
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Re: Falling
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by Skillz on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 03:25:30 AM AEST
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| what a great poem jerseysue..im so sorry that you are having to cope with that. as every negative has a postive..out of depression..fear...a very talented poet has emerged. We are here for you !! |
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Re: Falling
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 05:17:18 AM AEST
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| I can understand just how you feel Sue, you have expressed it just how it is in your poem.. xxx |
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Re: Falling
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 02:30:08 PM AEST
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"swallowed by waves of doubt"
love that line.....
good flow. |
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Re: Falling
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by StormyNites on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 06:53:38 PM AEST
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| great poem...i could feel everything...keep writing !! |
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Re: Falling
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 05:57:17 PM AEST
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Oh Sue, this had a wonderful flow.
Expression of the heart is evident here, and has been done
with amazing flare. Writing this down, must have at least been
good for the soul. Beautiful job. *warm thoughts and hugs*
~Breezy |
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