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Epic (Mine)

Contributed by Silent-No-More on Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 12:50:14 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry





This is my right now, somehow
This… is the story of me


And…
Everything I know of wings
Of quiet thoughts and simple things
Of passion’s song and whispered need
Of wordless truths and feeling free
Of falling down to learn to soar
Of bravery and being sure

This all-of-everything of more
This is me… unlike before

For…
This is dancing unrestrained
A freeing of what was once tamed
An epic tale, unparalleled
My every hesitation felled

This absolute vulnerability
This is me… as meant to be


My…
Desperation
Endless sighs
Hopelessness
Tear filled eyes

Lightning strikes
Thunder rolls
Childlike wonder
Secrets told

Impassioned pleas
Speechlessness
Faithful heart
One true wish

Simple want
Pure desire
Light of day
Night afire

Falling down
To rise above


This is me… in love.




Copyright © Silent-No-More ... [ 2006-09-21 00:50:14]
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Re: Epic (Mine) (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 12:55:00 AM AEST
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awww snemmy i can see your in love.
You go girl
awsome write

hugs


Re: Epic (Mine) (User Rating: 1 )
by Skillz on Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 12:59:42 AM AEST
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Loved the poem !!


Re: Epic (Mine) (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 10:50:04 AM AEST
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Oh Snem, This was perfect. I so loved how you penned it. The ending.... short stanzas that moved right along with powerful force. I love to read you. Great stuff, as always, my friend.
Peace, Laura


Re: Epic (Mine) (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 11:17:22 AM AEST
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Ohhhhhhh Snemm, hugs to you! Your heart on the page so perfectly displayed. Thanks for sharing your heart, open and soaring! Your pen sings hun it really does. Talent shines, lighting up everything and everone around you. I wish this feeling for you to never end! Noone deserves it more.

Michelle


Re: Epic (Mine) (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 02:43:50 PM AEST
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Love can be soooo wonderful
thanks for reminding me of that fact
Excellent flow


Re: Epic (Mine) (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 02:52:22 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. I wish I felt like that. Its nice to see what love can do. Sue xx


Re: Epic (Mine) (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 03:31:18 AM AEST
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This is also you at your best, Snemma. This piece pulsates with life, and skill too. The rhyme and rhythm are very musical and right on key.

Highly enjoyable and uplifting reading, this makes. Bravo!

Andrew


Re: Epic (Mine) (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 08:35:59 PM AEST
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Awesome declaration of self, Snem, and to the power of love to bring out our best qualities, and to make everything - even the miniscule, so darn intense.

A small correction - Line 13 is a little long. Maybe substitute 'that' for 'what was' (Ha! I just remembered when you did this to me).

S


Re: Epic (Mine) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 04:49:19 AM AEST
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As always, amazingly stunning and superior. The flow is pure perfection.

So, ya' gonna introduce us to this lucky bloke? ;-)

Timberanamo
O_O


Re: Epic (Mine) (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 05:20:49 PM AEST
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very very sweet.
profound sentiments on a page. excellent.

xXx

~kei


Re: Epic (Mine) (User Rating: 1 )
by NDean on Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 07:42:57 AM AEST
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Flows really well. I really like this poem.
The ending I really didnt expect. Really Cool.
Nathan


Re: Epic (Mine) (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 03:49:22 AM AEST
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This has just blown me away, another flawless piece of writing, true poetry can be felt, seen, and experienced, and this is what you have achieved here, it rolled so fast with emotion ritght toward the perfect ending(this is me in love) amazing words...well done!!!


Re: Epic (Mine) (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Monday, 30th September 2013 @ 01:16:24 AM AEST
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fantastic write!


Re: Epic (Mine) (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 1st September 2020 @ 03:58:28 AM AEST
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Loved it too.




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