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This Just Is
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 10:39:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This Just Is
this is everything, this is more
this is nothing ever felt before
this is timeless, this is true
this is what I wish for you
this is heaven … and this is hell
this can’t be bought but this could sell
this is sorrow, this is tears
this is the happiness of years
this is strong, but this is meek
this is wonderfully weak
this exists in space and time
this I cannot claim as mine
this is hers and this is his
this is something
that just ...
is
~ Nazmythian ~
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2006-09-20 22:39:01]
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Re: This Just Is
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 10:45:50 PM AEST
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Wow this is very creative.
Course all your writes are very creative.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: This Just Is
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 11:19:09 PM AEST
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In any defining moment, could this EVER be
explained??
hmmmm ... creates much provocation of thought, snazzy.
Excellent post. LOVE the ending .. it's perfect! : )
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Re: This Just Is
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 11:30:35 PM AEST
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This is...a freaking great write, Nazman. I loved how you did this. The ending....sweet.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: This Just Is
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 12:04:58 AM AEST
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| this is .. breathtaking..the idea, the rhyme..the entirety (sp) of it. It's complete; it goes from beginning to end ..like a circle. I love it. |
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Re: This Just Is
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 12:19:04 AM AEST
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ya i agree with Laurabean
freaky and freaky
well done as always
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Re: This Just Is
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by shelby on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 10:53:47 AM AEST
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Nazzy, THIS simply is beautiful, defining moment shared with us. Written with perfection and moving so moving.
I hope all is well with you, from reading this I would say yes* smiles
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: This Just Is
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 02:51:50 PM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: This Just Is
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by Spike on
Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 03:39:59 AM AEST
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Going through an existential peak, it sounds like (read as Dr Zoiberg). Whatever 'is' is for you, its also something for me, on so many levels, so this one really connected. Plus, nicely constructed, good stresses, subtle rhythm.
S |
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Re: This Just Is
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 03:33:25 PM AEST
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Naz,
What pops into my mind: This is that and that is this. One is strong the other weak...while these two poles the opposite depict, it is the inbetween that encompuses the meaning of everything. ...for without the parameters of black and white, (absolutes) there is no gray...
Don't ask me what I just said, just some free floating expounding.
Intreguing write my friend
Will/Terry |
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