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Armageddon
Contributed by
InfamousKilljoy
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Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 10:07:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Arageddon by Tyler Gardiner
I know that life is done
When the dark blots out the sun
When the wicked surpass the good
When what we do differs from what we should
A barren wasteland has taken place
Where I had seen a child's face
A face of kindness, joy, and glee
A memory swept out to sea
Prior to this ghastly fate
There stood structures tall and great
Too ignorant to see the trouble
Their cities cast into the rubble
Our future here is rather bleak
The last life ending with a shriek
Their constricted lungs filled with smoke
While earth itself, victim of a stroke
Our ashes scorch the ground
The tie to life almost unwound
The toxin that is man sinks deeper
Its now our time to meet the Reaper
Copyright ©
InfamousKilljoy
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2006-09-20 22:07:48]
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Re: Armageddon
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 10:25:32 PM AEST
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Well written.
Welcome.
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Re: Armageddon
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 12:41:49 AM AEST
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well done on this write
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Re: Armageddon
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 02:49:59 PM AEST
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As said before
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Re: Armageddon
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 03:34:51 PM AEST
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This was very well written and I liked how you wrote it... Read smooth and the flow was brillant... Great poem..
Take care
christina |
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