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Shattered Home
Contributed by
Uncertain_Oblivion
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Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 03:49:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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For My Dear Sweet Mother....
A porcelain house of trust,
Demolished.
Shattered little pieces,
Torn down by lies.
See me as you may,
Abolished.
Ripped from existence,
From the ones I loved.
See me as I'm not,
Accepted.
Pride swept over your face,
With a look of greed.
I see you as you are,
Cruel.
Pushing all away,
Expecting more of my pain.
I see you as you aren't,
Affectionate.
A hand held out for help,
I break it at the wrist.
You watch me walk away,
Astonished.
Wondering why I came,
Wasting your time again.
You'll see me again someday,
Deceased.
When we both lie below,
Buried in the depths of this...
~ Rhiannon
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Re: Shattered Home
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 09:00:53 PM AEST
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Extremely moving write.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Shattered Home
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by BobbyZimmerman on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 09:11:52 PM AEST
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| Wow, as always, full of emotion and very interesting. I love the defiance of the piece, essentially saying go to hell, I'm never coming back....great write, i dug it. |
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