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~To Keep You Warm~
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 11:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A single rose can say so much,
and take a winter chill,
with prose attached to warm your heart,
and sprinkle's at free will,
whilst winter came to frost my life,
i found a rose like this one day,
it's frozen blooms so beautiful,
i knew whatever came my way,
just like a flame it warmed my heart,
whilst through thy winter storm,
thy deep red rose, in which thy sent,
thy soul is then reborn,
crystal brilliant sparkling diamonds,
upon each petal colours devine,
toucheth my heart in truth 'tis true,
as the moon in night does shine.
~*~
big huggs valerie
your a rose of a friend
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Re: ~To Keep You Warm~
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 11:43:25 AM AEST
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| how beautifully written my sweet Nessa, let me know when you need any sprinkles, Love ya!!!! Val |
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Re: ~To Keep You Warm~
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 05:50:50 PM AEST
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| AWWW She is a rose! How sweet of you this I loved ! Great write! Christina |
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Re: ~To Keep You Warm~
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 07:05:21 PM AEST
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| LD and Val, two of my favourite people trust you both to give us such beautiful imagery |
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Re: ~To Keep You Warm~
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by The_Phantom on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 10:45:24 PM AEST
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Another wonderful poem, by a wonderful writer, loved the poem.
The Phantom |
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Re: ~To Keep You Warm~
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by LadyDama on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 12:49:15 AM AEST
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| the imagery in this beautiful piece of prose jumps off the screen and brightens my eyes... i love deep feeling surrounding this poem... precious... |
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Re: ~To Keep You Warm~
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by venkat on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 01:24:11 AM AEST
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| Aww! my dear beautiful friend, your poem is a most beautiful rose which is like a flame to warm your heart/ reader's hearts, but what is that prose attached to a rose ,in 3rd line of 1st stanza..I failed to understand.. but ofcourse i will try to read it again.... venkat |
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Re: ~To Keep You Warm~
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 04:52:51 PM AEST
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| the two of you should get together more often, totally beautiful images and a warmth and a texture that is Mmmm yeeahh |
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Re: ~To Keep You Warm~
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by Chef-Boy-R-C on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 07:44:47 PM AEST
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| Look up in the sky, it's a bird........it's a plane.........no it's a perfect poem! Sorry for the lame joke, but great write. This was pretty deep. |
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