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rain drops
Contributed by
skitzo-da-clown
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Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 12:07:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The rain falls.
And every drop that hit the surface I am reminded of you.
I am reminded of the tears you cried, and they make me shiver.
To know that I have wronged you, I deserve not to exist.
I wish you were still here, but alas I am yet to be answer for the prayer and favor I ask of "God" everyday.
I wish I could see you one last time, though I don't know what I would say, would I waste time with such words?
I don't think so...............
The rain falls.
And finally you understand.
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Re: rain drops
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 12:38:52 PM AEST
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This was a good poem.. I liked it alot... It made me think about a time maybe a year ago and what had happened to me with someone... This was a good poem..
Take care
christina |
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Re: rain drops
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by StormyNites on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 12:44:07 PM AEST
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| A great poem Skitzo..i think there are lot of us out there that can relate. |
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Re: rain drops
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by evolon on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 12:49:16 PM AEST
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| great poem, made me reflect on a time the recently passed but viewing it in your words made me realize my wrong played a small part. |
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Re: rain drops
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by BobbyZimmerman on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 09:14:38 PM AEST
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| Great write man, I'm reminded of "Kathy's Song" by Simon and Garfunkel, not a bad thing at all....good job. |
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Re: rain drops
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by kittie30 on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 09:49:43 PM AEST
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very good write...i had gone through the same thing and came up with sumthing similar, keep it up i think u may find comfort in your own words if u look deep enough into them
---Zane |
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