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Mirrortower Part I

Contributed by Let_Sin_Abound on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



I was lost in my words searching for my way back home
I was trapped in my thoughts wondering what else I could have done

Crying out in pain, looking for a shelter from the rain
Then I see the sun, open his way through the clouds
Flying rays of light, converge to a great source of might
As look I go blind, brighter then God’s blinding light

Oh, blinding power
In a face of the tower
Oh, blinding power
See my face on the tower

See my face in a face
In a face I see my face
See my face in a face
In a face of the Mirrortower
(I’m amazed as I’m in the tower)

But I’m outside in the rain
So I spent my time in vain
While in love with the mirror
To enter there I must break the mirror

Walk upstairs see the lens
All around in this room is glass
I can’t hide from my eyes
All around in my sight I see lies

I’m tired to walk this spinning stairway
I’ve got to wait until another day

Oh, blinding power
In a face of the tower
Oh, blinding power
See my face on the tower

See my face in a face
In a face I see my face
See my face in a face
Inner face of the Mirrortower

I open my eyes I’m lost in the dark
Is it a dream? Where is the light

It has been blew by the eclipse night
Forever blind – eternal darkness you will be inside
No more face you will see - you’re cursed to find another sin

The never-ending night will tear your heart apart
Meant to see no more - you’ve lost your only love
Only one who matters - your rotten shell reflected
You’ve got nothing inside - an illusion made of light

Oh, blinding power
See my face on the tower
Oh, blinding power
In a face of the tower




Copyright © Let_Sin_Abound ... [ 2003-02-14 11:00:00]
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Re: Mirrortower Part I (User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 06:05:56 PM AEST
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Dear Abounds, You show alot of poetic skill. I like the image of seeing the face in a face in...
As a kid, I liked to hold a hand mirror in front of me as I faced a big mirror. When positioned, you can look down a long corridor in the reflections of one mirror of another and another. Try it! Bizzy


Re: Mirrortower Part I (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 05:07:09 PM AEST
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a wonderful read, had my head spinning with images




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