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Rising Son

Contributed by BSteel on Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 02:47:19 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Bush, must understand,
not everything is so crystal clear,
conviction, cuts all other options,
when matters domestic require attention,
yet no justifiable Government intervention,
will use God's savior, soley for their benefits,
If that makes sense then were on the same wavelenght,
I aplogize if my words lack eloquonce,
but look man I'm just tryin to get paid by the elephants,
Dues have been paid, new shoes I feel fresh,
New Balance on life, calm , collective,
more perspective,
that perspectives are essential to get to the essence,
for happiness is illusive,
It comes and goes,
but the inner fire forever burns,
the passion penetrates inner flames,
concepts hang loosely,
religious themes trail with words thrown loosely,
forcing me to make a stand,
when all other perspectives are just a thought collection, of God,
some think I'm the one,
the son of gun,
rising sun,
words keep us father then where we started from.

Copyright © BSteel ... [ 2006-09-20 02:47:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Rising Son (User Rating: 1 )
by Oneir8dude on Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 10:26:28 PM AEST
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Very heart felt words....
The government of our beautiful country Needs a refreshing...
I agree... I am a chest bulging Proud American and it
Burns me to think my government can do this to our
hearts...

Thank You for sharing

Bill

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