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The Upside Down World
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 08:50:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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A small thing
sweet and innocent
- when compared with humanity
an action; subtle
an unmanly reaction
logic, what logic
- but for the moment
when the heart takes control
and the world turns upside down
and normality becomes impossible
and the impossible becomes conquerable
- for that feeling
- for the awaken heart
leaving the cold darkness
and the endless hope of dawn;
a small thing
sweet and innocent
- when compared with humanity
an action; so subtle…
5/4/06
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2006-09-19 20:50:02]
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Re: The Upside Down World
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by one-curly-fry on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 09:03:44 PM AEST
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| The problem with love at first sight is that it's very shallow. Our first talk was what did it, but since getting to know her... well... |
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Re: The Upside Down World
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by InfamousKilljoy on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 11:05:25 PM AEST
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| Your writing is very deep and emotional, I also love the format of the poem. |
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Re: The Upside Down World
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by InfamousKilljoy on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 11:05:27 PM AEST
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| Your writing is very deep and emotional, I also love the format of the poem. |
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Re: The Upside Down World
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by Alison on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 02:42:07 AM AEST
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| I think this write is simply beautiful. I really like the flow of it, and I think you did a wonderful job in capturing your feelings then. Awesome write!! |
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Re: The Upside Down World
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by whiteleo1984 on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 03:44:44 AM AEST
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| wondeful format, beautiful writing... love it... great job! |
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Re: The Upside Down World
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by LonelyPoet on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 07:09:22 PM AEST
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| You have such a great gift in your writings..i truly love them. |
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