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Letter comes in
Contributed by
crazyn
on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 01:33:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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Letter comes in
Letter says
You have a mission
Patriotism filled in my veins
Gazing from the dusty window
Notice
A dark shadow
Thoughts ring in mind
I have a reason to act
There is no ambiguity
But was the shadow?
The chosen
Saviour
Of society
Packing ammunition
Ready for a fight
Shadow appears
The light blinding vision
And now I am in prison captured by
Foes
Foes of peace
Foes of life
Foes of religion
Friends to death
Stalking me in stealth
Till capture is the result.
Copyright ©
crazyn
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2006-09-19 13:33:18]
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Re: Letter comes in
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 09:01:06 AM AEST
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Brillant.. Well written.. I liked this a lot... I am not really into war poetry and all but this was really good..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Letter comes in
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by ScorpionFire88 on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 02:07:41 PM AEST
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| I really enjoy war poetry if done right. And yours was. Great job! |
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