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Watch The Circus
Contributed by
Uncertain_Oblivion
on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 11:48:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Puppet master memories,
have you dangling from their strings.
Holly Hobby and childhood dreams,
falling at your feet.
Blink your eyes once,
and find yourself,
performing a balancing act,
like a circus horse...teetering on the edge of life,
and the brink of hell.
Your reward?
A leash pulled tight around your neck,
and a harsh whip at your back.
~Rhiannon ("Flames lickin' me like the devil...")
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Re: Watch The Circus
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by Light_to_your_Darkness on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 01:25:26 PM AEST
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| I fear the circus so this creeped me out...but I still like it :) |
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Re: Watch The Circus
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 01:42:38 PM AEST
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Stopped to read you once again. What drew me was the title....and the fact it was listed as Dark.....Circus and Dark go together, I hated the circus ...felt so friggen sorry for the animals. Well, don't exactly know where you are in this piece, but that's where it took me. Thanks for another great read.
Peace, Laura |
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