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The Main feature
Contributed by
violet_apted
on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 10:24:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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MAIN FEATURE
Yesterday, all it's joys, heartaches and growing pains.
Was oft a feature-drama that will not screen again.
Apprenticeship in living, as slowly ran the reel.
The whole world is our oyster. Exuberance we feel.
And now our days are numbered, with gratitude enjoy,
each magic golden sunrise before our senses cloy.
As mem'ries of each moment cascade within our brain,
Remember this main feature will never screen again.
Tomorrow is the future that we may never see,
Our footprints mark the path, to earthly destiny.
With deeds that offer substance to dreams of yesterday,
We potters etched the pattern embedded in the clay.
As angry times and people leave coal black sins behind,
Great shining deeds of glory uplifteth all mankind.
Grant we leave some seed. Hope, to lift the spirit high.
A brightly, polished, touch of class, a joyous last goodbye.
As epitaphs are sweetest when written by a friend,
May God embrace our living and sanctify our end.
And when our epic closes, the film rests in the can,
It matters how we acted in our allotted span.
© Copyright Violet Apted
Copyright ©
violet_apted
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Re: The Main feature
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by emystar on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 10:45:45 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your loss.
great writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Main feature
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by kasean on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 02:02:22 AM AEST
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| Im sorry to hear about your husband my brother-in-law died about 6 months ago and i never know what to say to her because i've never lost someone i was intimate with like that. I hope you don't mind i sent your poem to her. Beautiful writing! |
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