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candles
Contributed by
twick
on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 05:41:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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one single tear
falls for you
and in that tear
is more emotion than I could bear.
That is why it was shed.
In that one single tear
my heart broke for you
because of the love you share.
so far over the moon,
so hopelessly lost,
so beautifully sad.
On single tear
held the pain that you will feel
and the anger that fills me
when you're hurting.
Copyright ©
twick
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2006-09-18 17:41:20]
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Re: candles
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by LonelyPoet on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 05:42:48 PM AEST
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| simply and very touching |
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Re: candles
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by Alison on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 07:04:42 PM AEST
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| very moving, short but still powerful! great write |
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Re: candles
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by whiteleo1984 on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 12:28:24 AM AEST
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| simple, yet touching! great write! |
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