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not dead
Contributed by
blackrose233
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Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 04:50:41 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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I always try to hide its like Im dead inside
Im a ghost this body is my host
People all avoid me how can I make them see Im alive
Im not dead even though im in deaths path
Im not dead but im numb inside
I not dead, so why do you ignore me?
I too have a heart like yours
My heart maybe shattered but I have a needle and thread Im not dead.
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Re: not dead
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by StormyNites on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 05:17:52 PM AEST
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| what a vey good poem, ty for sharing |
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Re: not dead
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by LonelyPoet on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 05:39:43 PM AEST
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| I feel the loneliness ..a very well expressed poem ty |
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Re: not dead
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by spencer on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 10:08:34 AM AEST
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| An awesome poem, I wrote one quite similar to is called ‘I am alive’ if you have time give it a read |
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