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Still
Contributed by
drapes
on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 04:00:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I'm stuck in this world
That isn't even mine.
I'm looking for things
I'll never again find.
I'm unfolding notes
Creased with lies.
Searching for truth
In a feeling that died.
I'm looking for confort,
Even temporary.
But nothing alone
Is anything but scary.
I'm hiding my face
From reality pressure.
Reality's fake,
I try to assure.
I'm wishing on stars
As never before.
They quiver in fear,
So, alone once more.
I'm tracing my steps,
Though times have changed.
I'm searching for clues
Of any remains.
I'm holding on tight
To a place in time,
When a happy face
Was easy to find.
I'm standing so still
When it's going fast pace.
Time moves along,
A heart's in the race.
I'm fading away,
Lost in mind.
Stuck in a place
Of long past time.
I'm waiting for words
I'll never hear
From a soothing voice,
Whispered in ear.
I'm picturing love
And I see a face.
Familiar and sweet,
Fits right into place.
I'm wasting my time
On a drea everyday.
'Cause I refuse to believe
This love's slipped away.
Copyright ©
drapes
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2006-09-18 16:00:46]
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Re: Still
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by StormyNites on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 04:30:34 PM AEST
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| again ..well said..ty for sharing. |
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Re: Still
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by StormyNites on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 04:35:32 PM AEST
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| ty for comment on my poem..i tried to send a PM but it doesnt appear to be working.. |
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Re: Still
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 04:46:57 PM AEST
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| well done! |
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Re: Still
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by Alison on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 07:08:55 PM AEST
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| powerful and very sad. I know what you are going through.....I hope it gets better. Awesome write! |
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Re: Still
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 08:45:34 PM AEST
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I enjoyed the rhyming scheme here. This had a wonderful flow. Good write.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Still
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by Skillz on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 04:23:31 PM AEST
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| I just love this poem..ty for sharing it |
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Re: Still
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by whiteleo1984 on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 12:27:31 AM AEST
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| I love this poem, it should be a song! know exactly how u feel... thanks 4 sharing |
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Re: Still
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 02:21:12 PM AEST
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Excellent
good flow
I feel ya on this one.... |
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