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Buttercup Laces
Contributed by
silverscent
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Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 01:16:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Ashen shoes with
buttercup laces; untied.
In a skip of joyous cheeks
and a kin coloured kite,
the floor rose with fond eyes
and kissed a knee, or two.
The kiss was unrequited,
chased by abraded skin as the
sensation melted, into droplets.
In accord, the kite, (ruby as the knees)
had a broken thread,
and the wind began to blow.
Innocent sighs plead a return
as glistening eyes, peer high,
and see red upon a branch.
A dainty tickle with laces; tied
and a stretch to the leaves
sees the wind hush a smile.
Ashen shoes with
buttercup laces; neatly tied.
In a skip with a tight grip
and a tattered, cherished kite.
Mother’s hand gave a touch
and kissed the kite, in glee.
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silverscent
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2006-09-18 13:16:37]
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Re: Buttercup Laces
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by shelby on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 05:16:17 PM AEST
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Pretty write, cant even describe how this made me feel. Thanks for sharing this with us.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Buttercup Laces
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 08:51:59 PM AEST
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This was an exquisite write. Left so many different feelings, and some beautiful images. I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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