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Her Child
Contributed by
LonelyPoet
on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 12:17:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Dancing, spinning round and round
Childrens laughter the only sound
Sitting shivering on the cold park bench
A lonely figure,her hands tightly clenched
An eerie mist blankets the scene
Thoughts of what might have been
Come unwanted and yet so needed
Hot salty tears stream unheeded.
She damns the destiny
Of her childs infancy
Alone and forsaken
Her child's life taken
Copyright ©
LonelyPoet
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2006-09-18 12:17:07]
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Re: Her Child
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 12:48:34 PM AEST
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This was a very well written poem.. I liked the words that you chose and i really liked it..
Thanks for the comment on my poem... I appreciate it..
take care
christina |
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Re: Her Child
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 12:16:09 AM AEST
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oh that's fantastic...heartbreaking, but brilliantly written.
--talli |
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Re: Her Child
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by Steel on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 12:53:06 PM AEST
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powerful poem. Good job.
Steel |
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Re: Her Child
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 06:18:27 PM AEST
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oh my, this was so heart-wrenching.
Very sad, but well written. The last stanza
nearly broke me in two.
excruciatingly painful
~Breezy |
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