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My Silent Hell
Contributed by
Light_to_your_Darkness
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Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 10:53:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I lost my voice some days ago
not lost, per say, I made it so
words don't seem to break the wall
and so I don't deny my fall
People stop me. "What's so wrong"
"Jes, what could haunt you for so long?"
I simply stare, no movements made
my silent hell is where I stay
The sun still shines, and I still walk
the chores are done though silence stalks
I chooose my life, the way I see
my silent hell works well for me.
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Re: My Silent Hell
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by nightwolf on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 11:51:43 AM AEST
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| well written. i can relate to this. and your right words mean nothing. 2 thumbs up. |
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Re: My Silent Hell
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 12:39:19 PM AEST
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Loved it.. I can relate... well written... Great poem..
Take care
christina |
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Re: My Silent Hell
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by LonelyPoet on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 12:41:50 PM AEST
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| this is a fabulous poem, i understand the silent hell well. |
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Re: My Silent Hell
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by StormyNites on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 01:48:05 PM AEST
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| this poem gave me the shivers..i can relate so much to it. |
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Re: My Silent Hell
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by Drapes on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 04:29:47 PM AEST
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| I really like yours sense of just not caring. Great write! |
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Re: My Silent Hell
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by shelby on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 05:22:58 PM AEST
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Feelings all of us can relate to, the poem as it is is well constructed and flows nicely.
I enjoy work that moves something within me this did just that.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: My Silent Hell
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by Lionel on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 06:41:50 PM AEST
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| It sure wouldn't work for me. Good poem though. |
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Re: My Silent Hell
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by MarcRob on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 09:21:04 PM AEST
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Comfortable Numb springs to mind.
I can see how you are contented with this place you are at.. You know your enemy so well.. so you know where you stand.
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