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Days
Contributed by
twbanter
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Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 09:29:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Days
At the height of lunacy we shifted
No great memories there
I wonder of this mixture, and it’s carelessness
Does anything matter anymore?
What day is it anyway
Why do we stencil feelings
And wrap pressures so tight within
I’d like a breeze, and some refrain
Perplexed animation, these rains are falling heavy
Me? I’m okay
Habitation and dialect, these things bother themselves
People diverse despondent deposed
Me? I’m okay
Good, now it’s raining, whatever it is
I’m sure I’ve been there, harbored in health, and dignified
Bleary memory makes it seems so
My blanket calls and serenity comes to get me
But who the hell am I anyway
Some things just are
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Re: Days
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by ever1der on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 01:20:51 PM AEST
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| rain..blankets..they go good together..with a book of Yeats and some hot tea..that would bring serenity here. nice job. |
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Re: Days
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by shelby on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 05:35:49 PM AEST
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Incredible write!
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Re: Days
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by Lionel on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 06:44:50 PM AEST
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| Yeah.... That's a real poem. |
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Re: Days
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 11:24:32 PM AEST
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Wow. That last line is just ... well, it's just EVERYTHING isn't it?
some things most definitely just are!
This read like the activities going on in a conflicted
(and perhaps confused), mind; not quite knowing
whether it really believes the words, "Me? I'm okay"
wonderfully thought stirring.
~Breezy |
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Re: Days
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by twbanter on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 02:37:36 PM AEST
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Yeah,
A divorce after 24 years of marriage, and 4 kids (well, they're not kids now) Will do that...
tom W |
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Re: Days
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 08:26:00 PM AEST
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i love it!!!...it sounds so...sad. and kinda blah. like you don't really care...but yet your still sad/angry or whatever. i dunno...either way, it's absolutely amazing.
- Bethani - |
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