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Why are they Here?
Contributed by
shaba_11
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Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 08:56:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Under the glowing moonlight,
writing down my thoughts last night.
Guessing why are they here,
those tall shedded trunks.
Are they giving me a sign
or just warning me this time?
Now that my thoughts are getting shot
and my pages falling off.
The mirrors are now empty,
the leaves are grown plenty.
What shall I do….
with all these greeneries,
when I know my pages are falling gently.
OH! I got so much involved in it!?
I fear the name of my ancestors
will be killed.
How can I be so greedy?
Dumped my heart had no pity.
Now I understand….
what the trees were saying.
No matter how tall you be,
the sky can’t be touched
while you are on the streets.
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Re: Why are they Here?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 09:13:53 AM AEST
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| good write. |
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Re: Why are they Here?
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by ever1der on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 01:22:48 PM AEST
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| hmmmmm..why not let us try and interpret the metaphor..it's much more fun for the reader. |
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Re: Why are they Here?
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by shelby on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 05:37:38 PM AEST
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Loved this alot!
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Why are they Here?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 02:59:00 PM AEST
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nice little poem even threw some ebonics in there No matter how tall you be lol
good jod thou and keep on penning |
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