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Her Painting
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 08:22:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Before me is a painting
a young woman; my love
she rests there
so still, so quiet
I reach out to her
touch the surface
she is cold and hard
a question goes unanswered
a love token without reaction
for she is just an image now
but the memory remains
of wild nights
and running away
so I turn away
-it becomes too much to bare
and the painting whispers
begins to laugh
enjoying life the way she used to
-with me
so I turn back with hope
and watch her fade again
into that painting
that rests in her place
so still, so quiet
so cold, so hard
as always
to my touch..
4/5/06
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one-curly-fry
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2006-09-18 08:22:42]
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Re: Her Painting
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by ever1der on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 01:24:13 PM AEST
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| good job! Exchange the painting for something new.. |
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Re: Her Painting
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by one-curly-fry on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 04:28:18 PM AEST
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Hehe... already did - "When I sent you away".
The only problem is that my wall's pretty blank now... Still, I don't think I'd like another painting. They're not warm to hug. ;-)
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Re: Her Painting
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by LonelyPoet on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 07:11:27 PM AEST
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| This poem has left me in tears..you really are so very talented |
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