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Eye to Eye
Contributed by
scrambledyellowhair
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Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 06:19:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Iris to iris, pupil to pupil,
I mirrored your circles and chords,
made endless triangles, unlocked doors,
span in to the black and the blue,
and time flowed like honey in veins.
In the blue, banks were broke
as I poured in to your eyes;
currents forcing us free, waterfalls
feeding the globe, gouging canyons
at breakneck speed, Earth’s crust sliced
and scored, a Niagara streaming its course.
The boulders and rocks of my life
pulled thousands of miles like dust,
and I could feel the filth of myself
cleaned in the white foam floss.
Pulled in to the pool’s dark eye,
sinking in spaces of ink,
I saw every thing, like a god,
all that I could be, all that I was
and I was scared by the sight of it.
I fell back into the room,
looking only at you,
your pupils dilating,
and the Universe expanding.
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Re: Eye to Eye
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by Light_to_your_Darkness on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 10:58:31 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed this .. it was interesting. Thanks for sharing, it was good |
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Re: Eye to Eye
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by shelby on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 05:52:08 PM AEST
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Your play on words throughout was outstanding! I will look for more of your work.
A warm welcome to YPDC!
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Eye to Eye
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 08:56:58 PM AEST
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Very nice. I quite enjoyed this read. You are a fabulous writer, I look forward to reading more. That last stanza reminded me of a good Trip.
Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Eye to Eye
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by MoonlightKiss on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 11:53:17 AM AEST
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Wow very detailed and thorough
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