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my dark place
Contributed by
little_genna
on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 03:44:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I suffer with hell,
Can you not tell.
I always want to die,
That is no lie.
Everyone does not know me,
You all think how can that be?
Yet no one really sees.
No one wants to believe,
Why don't you open your eyes,
Instead of believing lies.
Can't you see a heart that cries,
A person that tries.
I am bound, restraints,
Friends that taint.
I want to give up,
Apparently too much to give up.
I am beyond care,
Yes, please stare.
I can't even be me.
Do you even see?
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little_genna
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Re: my dark place
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 8th January 2008 @ 05:55:32 PM AEST
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Amazing, this was posted on my birthday.
Great writing but very sad.
I can relate as there's been times in my past I can identify with these raw emotions.
hang tuff friend, 'cause it will get better.
I'm always here if ya need a friend.
huggs, luv, prayer,
emy |
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Re: my dark place
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th February 2008 @ 12:24:06 AM AEST
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This reminded me so much of some of the things that I had used to write.
This was emotional and raw and you let yourself speak freely about it which is always good. Raw emotions are so powerful and this was very powerful.
Hugs and take care
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Re: my dark place
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 07:51:23 AM AEST
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hope your ok, i love this poem, reaching into
your heart and exposing your pain through
poetic voices. lovely writting . . .
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