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Jealousy Jaggers
Contributed by
CassandraCain
on
Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 06:37:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I call you to see,
If I can come over.
But she is beautiful,
Just as a clover.
She is funny and smart,
You like her very much.
I hate her so,
Down to the very touch.
Her hugs are cold,
I知 full of hate.
And just like you,
Knives, I can relate.
How shall I kill her?
Chop her hair off first.
Take all her money,
From her wallet and purse.
I gave you everything!
And what has she done?
And you gave me nothing!
And she is the one?
I値l slit her throat,
So she can no longer laugh.
You think this is a joke?
I値l rip of her calves!
She hurt me inside,
So to her I do out.
There will be nothing left of her,
Just your mournful shouts.
I gave you my heart,
And you kick dirt in my face!
What is wrong with me?
What makes me such a disgrace?
I致e loved you since I met you,
You were perfect in every way.
And now what do I see?
Each and everyday?
I知 not good enough for you,
So tell me why!
I壇 do anything for you,
And now I can only cry.
I feel like dying,
You killed me you know.
I feel cold inside,
And nothing but woe.
I知 in my grave,
Waiting to be buried.
And let me just guess,
Whose body you carried.
I feel like Eleanor Rigby,
All alone as she died.
But unlike her,
For me no one cried.
Copyright ﾂｩ
CassandraCain
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2006-09-17 18:37:07]
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Re: Jealousy Jaggers
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 07:09:40 PM AEST
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:'( oh, that's so sad. it's a strong and powerful write, very emotional. and don't worry, he'll realize he was an idiot. but, by then you'll like or be with someone better. so don't worry 'bout this guy, he's not worth it. oh though, someday you'll thank him, cause you were able to write a great write thanx to him!!! keep up the good work, and i hope you feel better!! (ps. killing her will only make you end up in jail)
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Re: Jealousy Jaggers
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by thumper on
Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 09:55:01 PM AEST
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It's very painful when someone you love, loves someone else. I feel for you. Putting it down on paper can be very theraputic. Good write. Peace to you.
Thumper ;o) |
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Re: Jealousy Jaggers
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by brave_celt on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 08:31:43 AM AEST
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| nice poem you made me feel what you feel. my only advice would be to maybe shorten it up a bit. but dont take that the wrong way my friend |
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