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Hospital Life
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 02:12:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sinister and rotting the drugs sudate.
into a world that has made me break.
numbing and violated all my energy's gone.
tainting me back to where i don't belong.
they say the drugs will make me heal.
but i'm so dead that i can't even feel.
... so lying on a matrice crying silently inside.
being haunted by demons who scream through the night!
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2006-09-17 14:12:08]
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Re: Hospital Life
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 06:05:27 PM AEST
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| I get the point and it was well said..but there are a couple of minor spelling errors.. "sudate" should be sedate..and matrice should be matress..spell check is easy to use right before you post :) |
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Re: Hospital Life
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by little_genna on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 03:51:04 AM AEST
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| even with the spelling errors this poem has a hurt filled rawness to it.... i feel like i am going through this without being in hospital.... its kinda ironic that i want to be a psychiatric nurse but i dont agree with sedation and that drugs cure the problem... |
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Re: Hospital Life
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by JoeyTrib1550 on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 04:09:22 PM AEST
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Well I don't care for the *rude language* spelling, the poem is AWESOME
It really captures this helpless feeling
just loving it! |
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