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untittled III
Contributed by
jmpy84
on
Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 01:45:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You quit talking me
We lost contact you were gone
I thought our bond would be forever broken
I didn’t hear from you for months I wondered what happed
One day out of the blue you showed up from being gone
You felt bad you wanted to fix the bond
I loved the wave of happiness that I was riding
But now your going again and inside I feel like dying
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jmpy84
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2006-09-17 13:45:04] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: untittled III
(User Rating: 1 ) by ever1der on
Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 06:15:19 PM AEST (User
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this sure brings back memories.. If you'd fix the spelling it would be great..your should be you're for you are..little stuff like that. |
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Re: untittled III
(User Rating: 1 ) by Drapes on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 04:36:38 PM AEST (User
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Oh, I loved it!
I'm sort of going through somewhat of the same thing. I'm afraid that's how it will turn out but I still want him to come back.
I like the poem though. Nice format and good feeling! |
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