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In her eyes
Contributed by
somnium
on
Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 08:59:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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How did it ever come to this
I shattered your heart
And knew as did
That you felt every blow
I never forgave myself
And I don't think I ever will
How could I forgive
What I did to you
So tear me up now
I deserve no less
For my crime the
Sentence should be merciless
But from you I get
Grace
And you forgive me
This undeserving boy
He finds it hard to accept
And cannot believe
That his wrongs
Are wiped clean in her eyes
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Re: In her eyes
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by Drapes on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 04:31:50 PM AEST
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Ah, how I wish he would say that to me.
Did you tell this to the girl?
After reading a poem like that I don't know how you wouldn't be forgiven!
Good feeling of guilt and regret.
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Re: In her eyes
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 08:42:08 AM AEST
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It is hard to understand how what seems so wrong to one can be easily understood and forgiven in anothers... Love is powerful and so is honesty and understanding... I think if it was me I would probably still ask myself how can that be forgiven... sometimes it is hard to accept someones forgiveness when you don't accept or haven't forgave yourself for what you did... I understand where you are coming from in this poem... I thought this was well written and I liked it alot...
Take care
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Re: In her eyes
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by Faust on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 09:47:20 PM AEST
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Very well written... It strongly conveyes the remorsefulness and the ability that some have to forgive something terrible one might have done.
Eternally Punished,
Faust |
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